The Writer's Guild Thread

a_perfect_circle1678 · Former Queen - Dethroned by Choice

RE: The Writer's Guild Thread

Damaris · Queen Perv Supremo

I'd be lovin' up on Dave Spritz. Even with that funky hair and those lame pullover sweaters.

Wanna hear another funny scene from the movie? Hmm?

a_perfect_circle1678 · Former Queen - Dethroned by Choice

Damaris wrote:

I'd be lovin' up on Dave Spritz. Even with that funky hair and those lame pullover sweaters. Wanna hear another funny scene from the movie? Hmm?

Oh yeah, I'd do him! Hell the sweater would be gone anyways right!?

So what's the seen? Tell me, tell me!

a_perfect_circle1678 · Former Queen - Dethroned by Choice

That's SCENE!

Damaris · Queen Perv Supremo

Another flashback... this one is when they tried couples' counseling. They're in this big room, sitting on the floor with a bunch of other couples. The leader starts the class by telling each of them to think of something they have done or thought about that directly involves their partner, and that would hurt them if they ever found out.

Immediatey, Dave shoots up his hand and says, "I used to be really into porn... on the Internet... it got to be kind of disruptive after awhile..."

The leader stops him and says, "No, Dave... we're supposed to write it down on our pieces of paper and not tell anyone.".

ROTFLMAO, what a dork. He does stuff like that throughout the movie.

a_perfect_circle1678 · Former Queen - Dethroned by Choice

Damaris wrote:

Another flashback... this one is when they tried couples' counseling. They're in this big room, sitting on the floor with a bunch of other couples. The leader starts the class by telling each of them to think of something they have done or thought about that directly involves their partner, and that would hurt them if they ever found out. Immediatey, Dave shoots up his hand and says, "I used to be really into porn... on the Internet... it got to be kind of disruptive after awhile..." The leader stops him and says, "No, Dave... we're supposed to write it down on our pieces of paper and not tell anyone.". ROTFLMAO, what a dork. He does stuff like that throughout the movie.

LOL! OMG! This sounds like it really funny!

Damaris · Queen Perv Supremo

The movie was mostly "dark comedy". I personally thought it was one of the funniest movies I've ever seen, but then I have kind of a weird sense of humor. Yes, there are some serious moments (dad has cancer), but overall it was highly amusing for me.

He gets hit by food at various times throughout the movie by people driving by on the street. At one point, they show an entire montage of this, kind of a "Worst of Flying Fast Food" thing. Some of these things hit him in the face, making his hair "move" in the breeze.

a_perfect_circle1678 · Former Queen - Dethroned by Choice

Damaris wrote:

The movie was mostly "dark comedy". I personally thought it was one of the funniest movies I've ever seen, but then I have kind of a weird sense of humor. Yes, there are some serious moments (dad has cancer), but overall it was highly amusing for me. He gets hit by food at various times throughout the movie by people driving by on the street. At one point, they show an entire montage of this, kind of a "Worst of Flying Fast Food" thing. Some of these things hit him in the face, making his hair "move" in the breeze.

LOL! It must have been pretty hard not to duck. I mean if something is being thrown at you, it's a natural reaction. Anyways I think I'm really gonna like this one to since I have that same kind of weird sense of humor.

Damaris · Queen Perv Supremo

I don't know how he did it. He never even flinched. I mean, you would know that it's coming at you, but I guess that's an example of fine acting.

He got hit by burritos, fried chicken, apple pies, a Frosty. He once got hit in the head with an entire Big Gulp. Maybe I'm just easily amused, but for some reason I thought that was funny as hell.

a_perfect_circle1678 · Former Queen - Dethroned by Choice

Damaris wrote:

I don't know how he did it. He never even flinched. I mean, you would know that it's coming at you, but I guess that's an example of fine acting. He got hit by burritos, fried chicken, apple pies, a Frosty. He once got hit in the head with an entire Big Gulp. Maybe I'm just easily amused, but for some reason I thought that was funny as hell.

I wouldn't have minded being the one to clean him up then!

Damaris · Queen Perv Supremo

with your tongue?

a_perfect_circle1678 · Former Queen - Dethroned by Choice

Damaris wrote:

with your tongue?

Now what else would I use!? LOL!

a_perfect_circle1678 · Former Queen - Dethroned by Choice

I was just looking at the number of views on certain topics here & it is too funny! I'll bet our guests like your new system D. They're able to skip right to the smut! Fellow pervs, gotta love em'! LOL!

Damaris · Queen Perv Supremo

Well, I know some people are not interested in reading the whole damn story and want to skip over to the juicy stuff. Also, some people would be offended by the filth and only want to read what is "pure"... what the hell ever. I say, bring on the smut.

a_perfect_circle1678 · Former Queen - Dethroned by Choice

Damaris wrote:

Well, I know some people are not interested in reading the whole damn story and want to skip over to the juicy stuff. Also, some people would be offended by the filth and only want to read what is "pure"... what the hell ever. I say, bring on the smut.

LMAO! Here, here! Bring on the smut, or as I like to say, "Smut it up!"

a_perfect_circle1678 · Former Queen - Dethroned by Choice

The second chapter of "Min" is awesome D! I'm DYING for more! LOL! I like how you put "freaky" as the warning too!

Damaris · Queen Perv Supremo

Did you really like it? I'm so glad. And it was a real treat to get to explore the whole "you-are-under-my-control" scenario.

a_perfect_circle1678 · Former Queen - Dethroned by Choice

Damaris wrote:

Did you really like it? I'm so glad. And it was a real treat to get to explore the whole "you-are-under-my-control" scenario.

I LOVED it D! Yes the"you are under my control" scenario & egyptian setting are SO erotic!

a_perfect_circle1678 · Former Queen - Dethroned by Choice

What do you think D? I don't know why I didn't do this to begin with. Your writings deserve their own space on the forum! Maybe you can add some descriptions though.

Damaris · Queen Perv Supremo

I really appreciate you doing this. It will make everything so much easier to read, and now that I have new stories coming out (three, to be exact) within the next few weeks, this will keep everything managed more efficiently.

When I come home from work, I'll add some descriptions.

-- Edited by Damaris at 11:00, 2006-01-10

a_perfect_circle1678 · Former Queen - Dethroned by Choice

Damaris wrote:

I really appreciate you doing this. It will make everything so much easier to read, and now that I have new stories coming out (three, to be exact) within the next few weeks, this will keep everything managed more efficiently. When I come home from work, I'll add some descriptions.-- Edited by Damaris at 11:00, 2006-01-10

Aw your welcome D! It should have had it's own section all along! It will be easier for you to keep everything organized AND there will be no more question as to who's reading what. Member's anyways.

a_perfect_circle1678 · Former Queen - Dethroned by Choice

I just got dome reading the 9th chapter of Castor Troy. Awesome D! And now Sean Archer is involved! I can't wait to see where this is going!

Damaris · Queen Perv Supremo

I'm so relieved that you liked it. I was afraid it would not go over well because it doesn't have a sexual vibe, but I had to get the story moving towards a conclusion. It simply wouldn't do to have them humping like rabid bunnies in every single chapter, would it?

a_perfect_circle1678 · Former Queen - Dethroned by Choice

Damaris wrote:

I'm so relieved that you liked it. I was afraid it would not go over well because it doesn't have a sexual vibe, but I had to get the story moving towards a conclusion. It simply wouldn't do to have them humping like rabid bunnies in every single chapter, would it?

I wouldn't mind you know that D! That sexual vibe can just keep going & going & going (O.k. I think you get the point) for me! But yeah I'm sure your other readers would like some plot! LMAO!

a_perfect_circle1678 · Former Queen - Dethroned by Choice

I love chapter three of Min D!

Please tell me there's atleast one more!

Damaris · Queen Perv Supremo

Yes, there will be at least one more... maybe even more. I haven't decided yet. I'm glad you liked it.

a_perfect_circle1678 · Former Queen - Dethroned by Choice

Damaris wrote:

Yes, there will be at least one more... maybe even more. I haven't decided yet. I'm glad you liked it.

I didn't like it D! I loved it!!! And I'm so glad there will be more, whether it be one or more!

Damaris · Queen Perv Supremo

I'm working on "The Festival" right now

a_perfect_circle1678 · Former Queen - Dethroned by Choice

Damaris wrote:

I'm working on "The Festival" right now

Ooooh, I've been dying for another installment of that one too!

Sinclaire · Moderator

I think I ask almost daily if D has any inspiration for more chapters to any of the stories. Then I wait on the edge of my seat......which one of us gets that much closer to Nic in a story today????? We all have ideas, but it's D who brings them to life!!!